Daft2thePunk 190 Posted January 14, 2013 My eternal shadowThe shadow of life and deathIf my shadow was to disappearThen so shall I for I live in my shadowDwelling in the land of darknessSometimes it feels even deeperAs if I was my shadow’s shadowThe darkness so strong and vastNot even the flashlight can past theEvil in my past and the evil to come.Day of beauty, winds blowingBirds chirping, kids playingDogs runningUnexpecting of the event to comeSun high in the sky and thenIn seconds the world plunges into anEverlasting darknessSilence makes noise to allFear the shadows embraceA massive ball in the skyEmitting darknessHours have passed the sun overcomes darknessLight and hope returns, the world continues once again. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Avery 794 Posted January 14, 2013 Really like the shadow one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Daft2thePunk 190 Posted January 14, 2013 Thank you i get all scared and stuff posting my poems xD think people will think im weird q~q Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Avery 794 Posted January 14, 2013 Thank you i get all scared and stuff posting my poems xD think people will think im weird q~qDude writing is writing, it's not that mushy stuff. I like poems because the figurative language gives me different perspectives on things and the shadow one definitely did. 1 Oreo reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Eddy 3887 Posted January 14, 2013 there are tons of people on here with weird hobbies like the furfags and anime people. If somebody talks shit the community will usually have your back, unless you're a furfag 1 KGameLover1 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Coldfuse 324 Posted January 14, 2013 there are tons of people on here with weird hobbies like the furfags and anime people. If somebody talks shit the community will usually have your back, unless you're a furfagLike eddy watching Nathan barnatt's videos. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheDentist 235 Posted January 14, 2013 When I was in my teens I went on a poetic rampage, wrote several poems a day for months, printed booklets of them and handed them out to family members. Looking back most of them were bad, but it really helped me unload tons of crazy hormonal emotions back then. I think it's a super healthy method to release a bit, even if its never shared! Also, if your profile is correct we have the same birthday, though I'm a child of the 80s haha. Keep up the writing! I picked up guitar when I was 16, looked back at my poems couple years later and tried to turn some into songs, it actually worked for a couple Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Eddy 3887 Posted January 14, 2013 there are tons of people on here with weird hobbies like the furfags and anime people. If somebody talks shit the community will usually have your back, unless you're a furfagLike eddy watching Nathan barnatt's videos.who the fuck is nathan barnatt? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Coldfuse 324 Posted January 14, 2013 (edited) there are tons of people on here with weird hobbies like the furfags and anime people. If somebody talks shit the community will usually have your back, unless you're a furfagLike eddy watching Nathan barnatt's videos.who the fuck is nathan barnatt?[media=] this is NATHAN BARNATT(look at your pic look at the video) and this is him again in obama form Edited January 14, 2013 by Coldfuse Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Eddy 3887 Posted January 14, 2013 (edited) i seriously had no idea who the guy was in my pic, he just looked funnybut he has fucking moves bro Edited January 14, 2013 by EDDY! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Falco 235 Posted January 14, 2013 anime is the shit 4 Sakata, Taboo, Groov and 1 other reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Daft2thePunk 190 Posted January 14, 2013 When I was in my teens I went on a poetic rampage, wrote several poems a day for months, printed booklets of them and handed them out to family members. Looking back most of them were bad, but it really helped me unload tons of crazy hormonal emotions back then. I think it's a super healthy method to release a bit, even if its never shared! Also, if your profile is correct we have the same birthday, though I'm a child of the 80s haha. Keep up the writing! I picked up guitar when I was 16, looked back at my poems couple years later and tried to turn some into songs, it actually worked for a coupleThanks man Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dyscivist 5686 Posted January 14, 2013 My eternal shadowThe shadow of life and deathIf my shadow was to disappearThen so shall I for I live in my shadowDwelling in the land of darknessSometimes it feels even deeperAs if I was my shadow’s shadowThe darkness so strong and vastNot even the flashlight can past theEvil in my past and the evil to come.[media=] Also, people who can't write coherent sentences shouldn't write poetry. 1 Dojima reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jopo 369 Posted January 14, 2013 I was going to post Haaa Gaayyyyy, but I don't wanna hurt your feelings. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheDentist 235 Posted January 14, 2013 My eternal shadowThe shadow of life and deathIf my shadow was to disappearThen so shall I for I live in my shadowDwelling in the land of darknessSometimes it feels even deeperAs if I was my shadow’s shadowThe darkness so strong and vastNot even the flashlight can past theEvil in my past and the evil to come.[media=] Also, people who can't write coherent sentences shouldn't write poetry.Linkin park was the shit when I was going through high school, used to pump me up before team fortress clan matches hahah Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ryziou 538 Posted January 14, 2013 (edited) My eternal shadowThe shadow of life and deathIf my shadow was to disappearThen so shall I for I live in my shadowDwelling in the land of darknessSometimes it feels even deeperAs if I was my shadow’s shadowThe darkness so strong and vastNot even the flashlight can past theEvil in my past and the evil to come.-Linkin Park Crawling-Also, people who can't write coherent sentences shouldn't write poetry.Linkin park was the shitIt still is... :/ Edited January 14, 2013 by Ryziou Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oreo 2073 Posted January 14, 2013 My eternal shadowThe shadow of life and deathIf my shadow was to disappearThen so shall I for I live in my shadowDwelling in the land of darknessSometimes it feels even deeperAs if I was my shadow’s shadowThe darkness so strong and vastNot even the flashlight can past theEvil in my past and the evil to come.-Linkin Park Crawling-Also, people who can't write coherent sentences shouldn't write poetry.Linkin park was the shitIt still is... :/^New album was good, I like how they're constantly changing their style each new album. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Daft2thePunk 190 Posted February 9, 2013 The night filled with darknessan overwhelming excitement fills medark corridors, loving the darknesscold chills fill the air, all evil forcesbegging me to unleash my wrathVision turns dark, hearing amplifiedI can hear the heartbeats, read the fear in mindsIts like extacy to meUncontrollable i rush through the darknessslaying all, Destruction in my pathuntil i met this oneSomething about her halts my rampageregaining consciousness, her eyes filled with darkness like mineher heart dead just like mine, she says my nameand in a instant my demonic form was suppressedshe puts her hand on my chest and our heats beat once moreshe steps back and life leaves us once again.We are each others equalizers together forever demons in love for all eternity.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites